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Meeting Duffy!

WALT write a narrative story based on our artwork.

MEETING DUFFY

Two thousand years ago when dinosaurs were still alive, there lived two boys.One was bulky  like solid gold. He had big giant muscles and short fiery hair. The other boy was a show off and  he always got all the girls. He had smooth skin. Their names were Simon and Jack, ”Hey, show off, shouted Simon, lets  go home”.

When they were walking home, some people came passed in a car and started shooting at  them. BOOM BOOM!!!  They both died straight away. What seemed like hours later, Jack stood up and saw Simon looking down at something. Jack looked down and saw what Simon was seeing. They both couldn’t believe it! There were their two bodies lying dead on the ground. Simon looked at Jack. Jack looked at Simon. They both screamed. AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! “What happened to us?” asked Simon. “I think we’re dead”, said Jack. They were both shocked. They didn’t know what to do next. ”Where are we?” asked Simon. “I have no idea at all” replied Jack. They decided to walk home and think about it. When they got home, they saw their mum crying. She had been told that her two boys were dead. They felt bad for their Mum. “What are we going to do Simon?”, asked Jack. No sooner had Jack asked Simon, a big bright light lit up above them. It was magical. They could feel themselves being pulled up to this bright light. They felt very happy about going.

When they got up there, they saw their pet dog, Duffy waiting for them, his tail was wagging. Jack and Simon were very happy and glad to see their favourite pet. They hadn’t seen him for a long time. They hugged Duffy and he licked them back. They all ran off together to be with each other for always.
BY SIMON

Art Words

All About Me

My name is Simon. I am 10 years old. I have black short hair and dark brown skin. I have  thick black eye brows and I am tall like a giraffe.

I live  with my beautiful family. My handsome brothers, my pretty sister and my Mum and Dad.   My brother always play with me. My sister she comes to me and lets me do her hair.

I am Samoan. My Dad is from the capital city of Samoa which is Apia. My Dad told me great story. I have never been to Samoa but I really want to go there.
 
I like to listen to music  and play rugby, touch, league, and I play wresting with my two rough brothers. When it gets too hot we go outside to play a game with water and it is so cool and we have so much fun.

My best friend is Cypress because we always play rugby together and he’s kind to me. He has cool, handsome, short black hair. He has smooth soft skin. Cypress has bright brown eyes and long black handsome eyebrows.
I want to be a firefighter when I grow up. My other future  goal is to help the community. My learning goal for this year is to concentrate fully on my school work.