Meeting Duffy!

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MEETING DUFFY

Two thousand years ago when dinosaurs were still alive, there lived two boys.One was bulky  like solid gold. He had big giant muscles and short fiery hair. The other boy was a show off and  he always got all the girls. He had smooth skin. Their names were Simon and Jack, ”Hey, show off, shouted Simon, lets  go home”.

When they were walking home, some people came passed in a car and started shooting at  them. BOOM BOOM!!!  They both died straight away. What seemed like hours later, Jack stood up and saw Simon looking down at something. Jack looked down and saw what Simon was seeing. They both couldn’t believe it! There were their two bodies lying dead on the ground. Simon looked at Jack. Jack looked at Simon. They both screamed. AAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!! “What happened to us?” asked Simon. “I think we’re dead”, said Jack. They were both shocked. They didn’t know what to do next. ”Where are we?” asked Simon. “I have no idea at all” replied Jack. They decided to walk home and think about it. When they got home, they saw their mum crying. She had been told that her two boys were dead. They felt bad for their Mum. “What are we going to do Simon?”, asked Jack. No sooner had Jack asked Simon, a big bright light lit up above them. It was magical. They could feel themselves being pulled up to this bright light. They felt very happy about going.

When they got up there, they saw their pet dog, Duffy waiting for them, his tail was wagging. Jack and Simon were very happy and glad to see their favourite pet. They hadn’t seen him for a long time. They hugged Duffy and he licked them back. They all ran off together to be with each other for always.
BY SIMON